This is beautiful. Thank you for making this.
Mind blown when Strong Bad was the mexican mobster guy. That's exactly who he sounds like...
There appears to be something wrong here, fellow. Either there was an error upon exporting your flash, or there's one with me playing this in Chrome or something, but when I hit play, I get a white screen and what sounds like a mixture of songs playing. I appologize if this is an error on my end, but if it isn't, you really should check your flash before submitting it to the site like that. Wouldn't want another half-star eh?
Thumbs up for sunglassed Nyancat! Thumbs down for lack of animation. The song itself is quite exhilarating, I would love to see it with some more stuff going on besides "flying" Nyan cat against a seizure inducing background. Given that Nyan cat is usually flying through space, you could have made something a bit more exciting if you would have thrown in a starry space background with random shit flying by Nyan cat as he dubs through space.
Make some more shit happen visually, and this would be great.
Okay, this was really neat! It felt like a music video more than anything, given that there wasn't much story other than Kirby has a dream. I really liked the zooming in on the pixelated objects, I don't see that done much in flashes. I also like that you attempted to draw and animate Kirby as well, rather than using his sprite only.
The only complaint I have is that the backgrounds seemed kind of bland for a "dream" of sorts. One would expect more colorfull, random backgrounds in a dream of Dreamland. Maybe giant lolipop trees and apple watter wheels or just a general light and fluffy candy filled dreamscape.
I really liked what you did here, with the music and the animation, I just feel like it could have been more vivid. 3.5 stars for you, sir.
Thanks a lot :P
I do agree I could have added more to the backgrounds and made it more dreamy.
thanks for the review!
You gotta finish your cartoon before submiting it to the portal. You're little sketches were pretty cool, they've got potential, but you gotta actually animate them before submitting them. Not sure if this was just a rough draft, which is what it seemed like, but if it was, you need to keep it to yourself until your project is finished. Practice animating your sketches more, there's nothing wrong with pencil-like animation, so long as there's actual animation.
tl;dr finish animating bro! They're called animations for a reason.
I can see you had a concept here, but there is clearly not much effort put into presenting it. It might be hard to stick with making a toon, but you have to see it through to the end. That's the only way you'll get any better, bro. You've got potential, but you gotta put forth a little more effort than that to for said potential to go anywhere.
Well thanks for that but I would also like to let you know this was kind of meant to be crap I put little effort into this just so I could test something, but what you said really spoke to me and I shall make the next one (the one I'm actually trying on) alot better.
I agree with your point here whole-heartedly, but you could have expanded on this idea just a bit more. Your artwork is good enough, but your animation felt lacking, maybe because there wasn't enough of it. A bit of background music, something casual like elevator music would have made the delivery of the "dun-dun-dunn" more impacting, though I honestly doubt this was to be a serious flash, lol.
All in all, this was about average. With a good point, but lacking a good delivery, I give you 3 stars good sir.
I definitely taste some Cowboy Bebop in this. Me like.
Let him follow his dreams of being a deahtmetal singer!! :c
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.