firenova1295's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirbys Dream in DreamLand]

Okay, this was really neat! It felt like a music video more than anything, given that there wasn't much story other than Kirby has a dream. I really liked the zooming in on the pixelated objects, I don't see that done much in flashes. I also like that you attempted to draw and animate Kirby as well, rather than using his sprite only.

The only complaint I have is that the backgrounds seemed kind of bland for a "dream" of sorts. One would expect more colorfull, random backgrounds in a dream of Dreamland. Maybe giant lolipop trees and apple watter wheels or just a general light and fluffy candy filled dreamscape.

I really liked what you did here, with the music and the animation, I just feel like it could have been more vivid. 3.5 stars for you, sir.

BurntFoxProductions responds:

Thanks a lot :P
I do agree I could have added more to the backgrounds and made it more dreamy.
thanks for the review!

[The Mysterious Hero]

You gotta finish your cartoon before submiting it to the portal. You're little sketches were pretty cool, they've got potential, but you gotta actually animate them before submitting them. Not sure if this was just a rough draft, which is what it seemed like, but if it was, you need to keep it to yourself until your project is finished. Practice animating your sketches more, there's nothing wrong with pencil-like animation, so long as there's actual animation.

tl;dr finish animating bro! They're called animations for a reason.

FoxAnimations responds:

They are.

[Nailed It!]

I can see you had a concept here, but there is clearly not much effort put into presenting it. It might be hard to stick with making a toon, but you have to see it through to the end. That's the only way you'll get any better, bro. You've got potential, but you gotta put forth a little more effort than that to for said potential to go anywhere.

TheInnocentChildren responds:

Well thanks for that but I would also like to let you know this was kind of meant to be crap I put little effort into this just so I could test something, but what you said really spoke to me and I shall make the next one (the one I'm actually trying on) alot better.

[The Red Smiley]

The Song?

Is by Mudvayne. (I believe.)

If so, which one?

If it's not, than nvm and ON TO THE REVIEW.

Pretty good, you should defiantly do Madness flashes, the same style of Madness is shown here, A small few parts were choppy, Usually when you tried to switch scenes. Learn to work on that and you COULD be the next Krinkles. (well....maybe not, BUT HEY, still a good madness animator.)

Vladislavus responds:

Hey thanks a lot man, but I don't know, I realy want to start my own original series, I don't like to totally use ideas of other people (like taking graphics made by other authors. However my friend did help me in this here). So anyways, next time I ll' try to make it "less-madness" hehe, with more prespective views and conversations.
BTW: the song is by Mudvayne and it's called "Pushing Through" if I am not wrong.
Not my choice and not my friend's but I just needed a heavy song for this hehe.
Thanks for the review.

[LL - Fight the Power!]

The shit is

true.

this April fool's shit is not funny anymore.

LeafLock responds:

viva la resistance!

[The Creeper]

Pretty Good, but with a problem at the end

The claymation work here was pretty good, the music was fitting for the theme of it, and the the clay movements were choppy AND smooth at the same time, depending on the amount of action you tried to fit in to a scene.

And one big flaw would be that the replay button does NOT work, but the flash itself was good.

MikeFlash responds:

yes i am really confused about that because it works just fine in the origional swf file on my computer but doesnt on the site :P

[Stick Redub]

ok good for a first

it's pretty good,the animation is a bit choppy,but the fighting and music in the new one is good.

mako-mage responds:

Ty I kept looking for a song off the audio portal that wasn't used in any submissions before (I like the underground stuff) to use and when I found this I knew it was the right one.

[Snuggle Up With Klaus]

no good

it's animation isn't done well,and it doesn't make much sense,but thats probably you made it in 5 mins. Take some more time when work on a flash.

klausklapper responds:

You don't know Klaus K. It's making alot of sense to those who know him. Unfortunatelly, that's quite a small portion of this world .. maybe I should do a flash presenting him to the outside world ...

[Intermad: Striker]

good

is this the nstiker you were talking about or the trailer cause it says wait until the next episode:pilot?

anyways it has good animation,this music was done better by not completely repeating itself,and if this is the trailer find some good killing spree music,like hardcore metal or loud rocking 'cause the music didn't really fit this,but was still a good flash overall.

nstriker responds:

its not really a trailer because all of the Intermad introductions tie into the main episode which would be Intermad: Pilot and well there is just Shadow left until i work on Intermad fully and then you will see how they all tie in

N-striker

[Toast! Episode 1]

cool

this is pretty good,it's got good animation,music,and is funny,but a bit short though.

CatsomStudios responds:

thanks. The second one is going to be longer.